What a Wonderful World - A Poem

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By nextstopjupiter

I saw butterflies with machine guns

and the dolphins burning forests

I saw crocodiles dropping bombs

and the frogs polluting the air

I saw eagles firing missiles

and the penguins polluting the land

I saw bees driving tanks

and the tigers polluting the sea

I saw flowers killing children

and the trees building walls


oh, what a wonderful world!


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alekhouse Level 4 Commenter 2 years ago

Interesting poem...I'd love to see something a little longer next time :=)

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jayjay40 2 years ago

I think this poem makes the point that the animals are suffering for man is doing to this planet- well done

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Shalini Kagal Level 4 Commenter 2 years ago

Very thought-provoking poem, nextstopjupiter. Sad how it's impossible to imagine any other creature torturing Nature other than man!

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The Old Hack 2 years ago

Something to think about. Many thanks

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EYEAM4ANARCHY 2 years ago

It actually reminds me of the scene in Good Morning Vietnam. I always thought that was a great use of the song.

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Lita C. Malicdem Level 4 Commenter 2 years ago

I enjoyed your poem, I read it in the reverse. Yes, because of man's wanton ways, he is doing a lot of damage to other creatures who have equal rights as he does to enjoy life in this habitat- the Planet Earth.

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Dao Hoa 2 years ago

What a world we have!!!

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carolina muscle Level 1 Commenter 22 months ago

Very excellent irony!

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Mentalist acer Level 6 Commenter 13 months ago

Giving Natures possessions an unwanted job.;)

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Londonlady Level 2 Commenter 10 months ago

This is really good! ...it's a really creative way to point out what mankind (ahem...I mean, the "frogs") are doing to the environment!

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dilipchandra12 10 months ago

Thought provoking... simply the best, Very well written. Really good work!!

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mottiandbander 7 months ago

Nice words.

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palyabuz 7 months ago

think about...

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peperuhi 5 months ago

mant thanks for thinking about...very good

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