Unity - A Poem

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By nextstopjupiter

I was born to be free

But soon they arrested me

To put me in a cage called manipulation

Not the right place for a good education

They never asked me for my permission

Their gods were money and competition

The time went by and things became worse

Until I found the right teacher - our Mother Earth

No more manipulation but education

No more competition but cooperation

I was born again and I was free

Mother Earth was teaching me Unity


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bonny2010 16 months ago

Ahh good old mother earth...if you take the time she can teach you a lot...but like all good teachers they get slammed by the system...loved this poem...thank you

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nextstopjupiter Hub Author 16 months ago

Thanks for reading and your comment!

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Genna East Level 6 Commenter 15 months ago

I like this poem. Thank you for sharing. There is no better teacher than Mother Earth...it is a shame we are such poor students, collectively speaking.

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Darknlovely3436 Level 5 Commenter 15 months ago

Love your way of seeing how this world operates

thank for sharing another fine piece with me

Darknlovely

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HartMurengu 15 months ago

Good Poetry, seeing the world in philosophical way. Mother Earth is the Best teacher.

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Micky Dee Level 4 Commenter 15 months ago

Great write nextstopjupiter! Bon voyage brotherman!

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michael's son 15 months ago

Great subject, Great poem, I love it keep up the good work

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C.S.Alexis Level 1 Commenter 15 months ago

My all time hero and mentor, she rocks. The Laws of Mother Nature are the true laws, HuMan is on an ego trip! Loved this poem and shared it on my facebook page.

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saddlerider1 Level 7 Commenter 15 months ago

For all it's problems created mostly by MAN mother earth is where I want to be, however we are being watched and one day soon Disclosure will emerge and we earthlings will have to account for the destruction and greed and wars we have caused here on beautiful earth. Welcome to a New World Order...yikes..

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Spirit Whisperer Level 6 Commenter 14 months ago

A wonderful poem from a beautiful spirit. Thank you.

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SEM Pro Level 2 Commenter 14 months ago

Love it Bernd! Succinct and enlightened truth :)

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vocalcoach Level 7 Commenter 14 months ago

OMG - magnificent! You can really write. I am already a fan and eager to read more from you. This is brilliant. I have learned more from mother earth than from man. She teaches by example. If all of us would only take the time to listen, watch and act. Warm thanks and appreciation - vocalcoach :)

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karengibsonroc Level 2 Commenter 14 months ago

simple...elegant...beautiful!

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James A Watkins Level 8 Commenter 10 months ago

Cool poem man! I can dig it! I hope your adventures are going well. I miss the road.

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mottiandbander 9 months ago

Wow someone thinking about earth instead of money ...i like it.

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JT Walters 8 months ago

Hi nextstopjuptier,

Really great poem. I like it as well.

JT

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sonia05 Level 4 Commenter 7 months ago

excellent poem with a great message!! I really liked it!

thanks for sharing! voted up!

sspai 7 months ago

its indeed a nice poem!

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Jennifer Essary Level 5 Commenter 6 months ago

Silly humans think we can control the planet and some have set out to save the Earth. The Earth will still be here, humans will not. Great poem!

Lola hopscotch 5 months ago

U ARE BORN TO WRITE! i can write better, but keeep on goin bro

sneha thomas 3 months ago

i love this poem and it is very touchy

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Lady_E Level 7 Commenter 2 months ago

Such a lovely poem, with an important message.

Thanks.

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SanneL 2 months ago

To find Mother Earth is a gift to cherish and embrace for as long as we live. Brilliant poem! Thanks.

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IronicDiscovery 2 days ago

Wonderful and so true :D

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